Faculty+Feedback+and+Suggestions

3/30/15 (M Dudiak) Looks like a few documents are missing from your Personal section. Did you embed them? Are you including a video in your Prezi? It seemed like it when I saw "click play."

Since it appears you haven't been in your portfolio since 2/23, I assume you haven't made any of the suggested adjustments from my 3/2 feedback. Please review and make those changes.

3/2/15 (M Dudiak) I like your use of Prezi to introduce yourself. Where it said "click play" nothing happened. You should move any pictures to the bottom of an artifact like in your Short and Long Vowel lesson. Are you planning to put some more evidence of student work? You need to take out or leave room for the COL from this semester in InTASC 6. If some standards will only have two artifacts you can remove the 3rd title in the table of contents. What are you thinking for InTASC 9 artifacts?

12/25/15 (MDudiak) I like that you tackled the screencast but that really shouldn't be done until the very end. You should have an introduction to yourself that shows first on your home screen. Something that will help the evaluators get to know you in brief way. I love seeing photos related to an artifact but they should be at the end of the page with maybe a few labels to explain what they are seeing. Are there pics with your Lit Bag? I didn't see any. You'll need to swap out some InTASC 6 artifacts for your 5 day COL. Nice to see some student work evident. To make sure your e portfolio is more interactive--consider any videos to bring the artifact alive. Looks like you should keep in mind areas you need artifacts when in your student teaching rotations to help fill in the blanks.

8/18/14 (MDudiak) Well organized portfolio--easy to follow your artifacts. Now it is time to focus on collecting artifacts that will make it more creative, engaging, and interactive. Start these coming semesters to collect videos, photos, student work, etc. You have a solid start.

5/14 (L Shiffman)

Great that you have 10 artifacts and RNs across several standards Nice job on some edits from previous comments. Continue to add pictures. slides, work samples, etc

4/14 (L Shiffman) You are planning to revise your video at some time in the future. Consider giving your RNs titles that relate t the artifact. Interactive Writing Artifact, add the letter to the NAEYC rationale Congratulations on keeping the artifact grid. It will be helpful in the future. Consider taking any extraneous dates off Looking good!

1/10/14 (MDudiak) Personal section: I received an "error" message when trying to view your video--you might check that. Glad to see most of your personal section is complete. Good job staying on top of all the components.

Professional section: Happy to see you are embedding your documents. Good start on writing your reflective narrative--one was a bit long so we might help you in being more concise and direct in all the RN sections. Nice job including them before the artifact. Unless your instructor requested it, you don't need to put the InTASC and NAEYC standards at the top of each assignment/artifact. Nice effort and presentation on your e portfolio!

Please make any updates or changes before the spring semester starts.